Okay, so we love the addition of the wheels on the bottom of the trailer. Awesome!
But... we loved the grass on TOP of the trailer because we won't be traveling on grass, we will be traveling on pavement. Haha! Perhaps you could just use a line to represent the road?
Could you put the grass back on top and make the font of the SLOGAN a bit larger and in a color like purple or other accent color?
Since the macadam (asphalt) that you are riding on is black, I think that's most appropriate color for the tag line. Plus, becasue of the line lenght and size it is VERY readable, after all it is a nice tricky tag line :)
Hi Bill, We really like the way you thought about the tag line and how readable it is and how we're riding on blacktop. Awesome thinking!
Could you fill in the tires with the turquoise color instead of leaving them white? We'd like to see it because it might balance better with the semi-circle sun on top of the trailer.
Thanks and we look forward to seeing this small revision and anything else you are inspired to change or add..
We just wanted to let you know that in order to work with some of the other artists, we temporarily moved you out of the top 5. If they don't come through with the revisions, we will definitely put you back into the top 5 because we do love your design!
Just wanted to communicate with you and let you know what we're doing so that you don't think we aren't interested anymore. That's NOT the case!
PLEASE DON'T LEAVE THE CONTEST! We just want to see some other revisions and now that we are at the Top 5 stage, we can't have any revisions outside of those 5 slots as you know. Please don't leave us. I am not the only voting on this logo and I really like your design, so over the next few days we will be moving people in and out of the top 5 to give them a chance to make revisions. You are definitely one of those people and the cartoon style is not the only one we like, just what we're working on now. Please stay with us! :-)