Thanks for showing us an alternate slogan placement. Could you straighten it out to see what that would look like instead of curving it and making the font a tiny bit larger?
OR perhaps the scale of the trailer could be larger too so that the slogan could be large and in scale and size with the trailer too.
Thanks again for providing feedback! I have attached a sample with a straightened slogan and another showing it in two lines so I can make it bigger. Let me know what you think...
Thanks so much for the revision! We love it and in order to work with some of the other artists, we temporarily moved you out of the top 5. If the other person we are working with doesn't come through with revisions, we will definitely put you back into the top 5 because we do love your design!
Just wanted to communicate with you and let you know what we're doing so that you don't think we aren't interested.