This is along the lines of what I was thinking. Do you think Daily striving for social and academic excellence is too wordy to add to the bottom of entry 17 and 18
The last few entries are wonderful but it seems as if the words are cluttered together because of lack f space- can we enlarge the circle to make it less congested? use striving daily instead of daily striving
I have moved away from the seal as it seems to cluttered and doesn't give a clean sleek professional feel. Can you play around with the colors- freelance with what colors speak to you and with the fonts for entry 38? Don't forget to use striving daily - instead of daily striving. Its clear you are the frontrunner- cant wait to see your next submission.
The seal seemed to loose some of its clutter. I am concerned that the power behind the words will get lost if they appear to be running into one another. I have narrowed it down to your 2 designs that resemble 60 and 58. I am just allowing you to play with colors that speak to you as the colors I provided will be for the first school under the umbrella of Frayser Community Schools, so color scheme is what jumps out at me not what I initially submitted