I think the name on #24 needs to be a different color, maybe just black. The idea with the hands is good but somehow I feel something is missing. I don't know how to describe it.The name on #52, #53 and #54 is just a little too small and cramped
G' morning to you! Here are some variants #88 / #89 / #90... take a look at these and in the meanwhile, I will think about other ways to make you appreciate it more ;)