I apologize but, unfortunately since during the blind phase other designers submitted the concept of two children as part of their design to express communication.
I am not allowed to use that idea.
Please see entry #188
Some of our panel have asked about incorporating a second face to express communication as opposed to looking at the star. A couple have mentioned that the star is too prominent. Do you have any clever ideas on how to incorporate their suggestions?
I have asked several people about the finalist logos. They like your logo! They have asked about different color palettes. Can you try something in blue as opposed to gold?
We are going to present the finalist logos to a group of friends to get their reactions. If you can make the requested edits in the next 8 or 9 hours, I would appreciate it. Thanks!
We still like this design. Is there any way you can make the face profile a little more obvious or pronounced? We had a person look at the logo and they couldn't figure it out. Thanks!
Wow, eShopDesigns, you keep turning out more and more interesting ideas!
We discussed this latest trio of logos and have decided to pass on them because of the "feeling" the gave us. In an attempt to be helpful, let me tell you where our brains went:
* The person looked like they were trapped in a bubble, rather than be made free.
* My wife thought for at least one of the images the person was a mermaid.
* It almost looks like the person is doing the splits by trying to balance over a chasm
I hope this feedback is helpful. Thank you again for the many varied designs you are submitting!
We love that you keep inventing new and different ideas! We struggled to capture the meaning on this one since it looks like a child kicking large balloons. We're going to pass on this one. Thanks again.
There's something youthful and energetic about this design that I like. My wife is not as fond of it, but I think some other iterations may be possible in the next phase if we have you as one of the designers. Thanks!
Hello, Thank you so much for taking time to comment on my previous entry.
I look forward to your thoughts on this new entry. Please feel free to request any changes.
Hi eShopDesigns. Thanks for the submission. We weren't sure what to make of the design. It reminded us of Twitter a little bit. Our organization has nothing to do with birds so we're going to have to pass on this submission. We look forward to seeing more ideas from you. Thanks!
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Please see revision #193
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This looks like they are about to kiss. Is there another way?
Thanks!
~ Rick
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I apologize but, unfortunately since during the blind phase other designers submitted the concept of two children as part of their design to express communication.
I am not allowed to use that idea.
Please see entry #188
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I will submit the color variation shortly.
Thanks!!
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I have asked several people about the finalist logos. They like your logo! They have asked about different color palettes. Can you try something in blue as opposed to gold?
Thank you,
~ Rick
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Thanks for the edit. I am getting feedback from a larger group for the final designers. Stay tuned.
~ Rick
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I apologize for the delay. I look forward to your thoughts.
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We discussed this latest trio of logos and have decided to pass on them because of the "feeling" the gave us. In an attempt to be helpful, let me tell you where our brains went:
* The person looked like they were trapped in a bubble, rather than be made free.
* My wife thought for at least one of the images the person was a mermaid.
* It almost looks like the person is doing the splits by trying to balance over a chasm
I hope this feedback is helpful. Thank you again for the many varied designs you are submitting!
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Please let me know if you need anything else.
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Please see revisions #105 and #106
Thanks!
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Please see revision #70
Thank you,
Yadi
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Thank you for your many submissions and clever ideas. This one is our favorite from you so far. :-)
We wish the "tail" of the speaking bubble was a bit more pronounced so that it is more obvious what the shape is.
Thanks!
~ Rick
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I look forward to your thoughts on this new entry. Please feel free to request any changes.
Thanks again!
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~ Rick