Foundations of CommunicationLogo Design Contest

Hi,

Please see revision #193

Thanks for reviewing!

Hi eShopDesigns,

This looks like they are about to kiss. Is there another way?

Thanks!
~ Rick

I look forward your thoughts.
Thank you!

Please see entry #189

Thank you!

Can you use an adult face profile as the second face? Nobody has that.

Hello,

I apologize but, unfortunately since during the blind phase other designers submitted the concept of two children as part of their design to express communication.
I am not allowed to use that idea.
Please see entry #188

Thank you!

Some of our panel have asked about incorporating a second face to express communication as opposed to looking at the star. A couple have mentioned that the star is too prominent. Do you have any clever ideas on how to incorporate their suggestions?

Thank you :-)

People seem to best like the font layout in the current 2nd ranked logo. Can you do something similar?

Thank you so much for the update!
I will submit the color variation shortly.
Thanks!!

Hi eShopDesigns,

I have asked several people about the finalist logos. They like your logo! They have asked about different color palettes. Can you try something in blue as opposed to gold?

Thank you,
~ Rick

Good morning (in whatever timezone you are)!

Thanks for the edit. I am getting feedback from a larger group for the final designers. Stay tuned.

~ Rick

Hello good morning,
I apologize for the delay. I look forward to your thoughts.

Thank you.

We are going to present the finalist logos to a group of friends to get their reactions. If you can make the requested edits in the next 8 or 9 hours, I would appreciate it. Thanks!

Congratulations on making to the finalist phase!

Is there also a way to make the bubble tail more pronounced and open instead of solid grey? Thanks.

My wife like the open (not solid) tail on the speech bubble. Other than that, we like your other designs more.

We prefer the star as opposed to the sunrise. Thanks!

We still like this design. Is there any way you can make the face profile a little more obvious or pronounced? We had a person look at the logo and they couldn't figure it out. Thanks!

Thank you both for your continued feedback. I really do appreciate your time. The detailed feedback is definitely helpful :)

Thanks again!

Wow, eShopDesigns, you keep turning out more and more interesting ideas!

We discussed this latest trio of logos and have decided to pass on them because of the "feeling" the gave us. In an attempt to be helpful, let me tell you where our brains went:

* The person looked like they were trapped in a bubble, rather than be made free.

* My wife thought for at least one of the images the person was a mermaid.

* It almost looks like the person is doing the splits by trying to balance over a chasm

I hope this feedback is helpful. Thank you again for the many varied designs you are submitting!

No worries. Thank you for taking time to comment.

We prefer the other design.

Thanks eShopDesigns. I'm not quite as fond of this design. I more liked the star in the speech bubble. Will ask my wife for her opinion later tonight.

I'm not sure I get the symbology here. We really like some of your other designs even more.

You're very welcome!
Please let me know if you need anything else.

Thank you.

Nice! Thanks!

Good morning,
Please see revisions #105 and #106

Thanks!

We love that you keep inventing new and different ideas! We struggled to capture the meaning on this one since it looks like a child kicking large balloons. We're going to pass on this one. Thanks again.

There's something youthful and energetic about this design that I like. My wife is not as fond of it, but I think some other iterations may be possible in the next phase if we have you as one of the designers. Thanks!

Better, thanks. Can you bend the pointy part to look more like logo #71? A slight curvature would be good too. :-)

Hello, Thank you for your feedback!

Please see revision #70

Thank you,
Yadi

We couldn't figure out this image. We appreciate that your ideas are so varied. Looking forward to more from you. Thank you.

I like the happy child part, but it's missing something.

Not sure what the image is conveying in this case. Thank you.

Hi eShopDesigns,

Thank you for your many submissions and clever ideas. This one is our favorite from you so far. :-)

We wish the "tail" of the speaking bubble was a bit more pronounced so that it is more obvious what the shape is.

Thanks!
~ Rick

Hello, Thank you so much for taking time to comment on my previous entry.
I look forward to your thoughts on this new entry. Please feel free to request any changes.

Thanks again!

Hi eShopDesigns. Thanks for the submission. We weren't sure what to make of the design. It reminded us of Twitter a little bit. Our organization has nothing to do with birds so we're going to have to pass on this submission. We look forward to seeing more ideas from you. Thanks!

~ Rick