Dear Catherine,
Thanks for your entries! We love that you're from New Zealand, One of us (an American) used to live there, and the other (me) wants very badly to visit. Are you influenced by Maori Art? Just curious. The words "Foundation Partner Program" look very nice. We particularly like the combination of black and gray, although the font contrast in the black/burgendy option is nice. Could you try working on a different mark? It's hard to explain why, but these aren't as appealing as we'd like. If you are following Maori Art, could you possibly take a different approach? Our base is mostly American. Also, feel free to experiment with other colors. This mark should be consistent with the Foundation logo, but I don't think we need to use the exact same colors. Thanks!