This one has CA at the top and is minimally intrusive, the other 2 have variations on the side of Company. I think putting it behind the saddle may make it too busy.
Going back to basics,I think we can just go with this one without the text on the outside. Looking at it now, its cleaner and the saddle fills up more. The only thing that might be added is "Calif." somewhere in the doves on the right side, above or below the text.
This looks about as good as this design is going to look! Great work! There's on last idea I'd like to toy with, if you're willing. That is to replace "Foster Saddle - company" with "Rio de Plumas - saddlery", and replace "best seat in town - arboga, ca" with "Grey L Foster - Maker".
I've made some more space between the curved text and the outlined shape. curving the top and bottom wouldnt make any difference with the spacing, the difference would be aesthetics, if you think youd like that better i can do that
Yeah that's looking good. What do you think about rounding the top and bottom? I'm just trying to keep that general dimension and allow as much room between details for embroidery
Fantastic. This is the best one so far. I'd still like to see just a little more wide than tall keeping this same style border. Maybe one with a curved line on top and bottom instead of the two points, as well.
Yep! That's awesome. I'd just like to do away with the design in the top and bottom points, to allow those to get shorter and the vertical sides to get a little taller, as if to get a little closer to a rectangle.
I like this. Can we replace 'genuine quality' with 'best seat in town'? Also, I'd like to see a version without the lines connecting the circle; instead, a wide hexagon border?
Great, thanks! Just to save you some time, it does matter what style the saddle is in. Most of the other logos with saddles have not been right for what I do. The saddle styles in the pictures in the brief are correct. Thank you!
I really like how much potential this has. Rather than est 2017, we could go with Arboga, Ca. And I'd rather see a saddle in the place of the hat. I've posted an example in the brief. the saddle could sit where the hat is with the stirrups hanging between the words maybe.
Great job! I like the look of this much better. Would it be possible to make the two look a little more fluid, rather than two halves of the same logo? I was thinking like a flowing scroll
Hi, I have the revisions ready to upload, and another design. At this stage of the contest only the top 5 ranked can upload, you can temporarily place me in the top 5 so I can upload the designs, then rerank again as you see fit, if you wish, thanks!
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