yes, getting there, need line thickness increased, bring the hexagonal boundaries in closer - need to maximise visibility of the logo, try to optimize the layout - I think the layout for #13 is good in terms of balance
Cursive script is not the way to go since we are losing definition and legibility. The logo will be small when placed on the vials, label size is only 10 x 30 mm and will need to accommodate other text together with the logo. I guess a regular font, neither cursive or script would be preferable. Soft like Arial rounded but still modern style
I really like this design and the concept, however I think it could be improved by using a more elegant font, can you stick to your original concept but show me some more elegant fonts ?
nice contrast with the font, size and colour for the product name, good idea with the benzene rings, perhaps a little too complex with the orange and purple rings. This product logo will be place on tiny little plastic containers about the diameter of a child's finger - needs to be readable
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