I like the basic layout of your design. It is very clever. If it was a little less hard edged and more stylized I think it would give the feeling of movement and be a little less robotic. Thank you for taking the time to design and submit your entry. I hope my feedback will allow you to submit additional ideas.
Thank you for the new design. At first it just looked like a star but after looking at it several times I could then see it was a person. Maybe if the star was angled slightly so the head was more vertical it would look like a person at first glance. I will get some feedback from others, but I think you are going in the right direction.