ForSea InvestmentsLogo Design Contest

Hello Fatart,
It's not easy to give you directions because you respected the brief but when we showed your logo to third parties:
- people are not relating the logo to the sea. The S in particular, people don't have a clue what is it supposed to represent
- The F is not readable (they read C).

Ideally, we would like the F and the S to have the same organic effect.

Thanks

any revision?

Okay, i’ll try it..

Yes please have a look at the brief I wrote. The idea is to make a very organic logo using the "F" of For and the "S" of Sea. I want people that see the logo to feel/see the sea. Thank you

Thanks for your feedback, very helpful
do you like a word ForSea ?

Hello Fatart,
Thank you for your logos. We cannot use a logo with only FS so put in the "no interested list" all the ones with FS.
Regarding this one and another one, I am looking for something far more organic. I want people to see waves, to feel the sea when they look at our logo.
Many thanks and have a nice evening

Hi..
could you please give me your general opinion on my various designs. What you like and dislike in addition to the specific changes your requested?
If you would like any changes please let me know, looking forward your feedback. Thanks!!

Kind Regards,
Fatart