The shortening of the slogan takes too much away from its impact. I've played with various versions and that has been the most impactfull in my feedback. That's why I say that I chose them very carefully.
Your symbol is solid! I see the "F" and the "S" used in the symbol. It's simple, yet solid, and can stand on its own.
I like the squared lettering better than the rounded.
Some have been able to fit tools or small symbols into the name and/or have made the emphasis on the word play in the slogan, which as you know, is a big deal to me.
I hope this helps you!
I like the higher buildings. I was trying to figure out the slogan, but it is a lot and had little room for much different. Not that I'm unhappy with it, just stewing on options. To emphasize the play on words and maintaining done legibility.
You've made a big change and I like the improvement you've made to this point. Great job! The top 4 are making it difficult to choose.
This one looks good too. The gold isn't standing out from the black quite enough and it blends together too much mudding the logo a bit.
The red, white, and blue looks too much like a presidential campaign sign.
Im looking for the slogan to be at the top of the symbol for the first half, botom of the symbol for the second half.
It is Have confindence WITH Foresight. I made the same mistake in my last post too.
I like the incorporation of the magnifying glass, and the symbol looks like it can stand on its own. However, I'm looking for something for something bolder. As these submissions come in, I'm seeing color variations, wording options, and use of symbols that have exceeded my input. I'm trying to help without giving away the ideas of others, so I hope I'm helping.
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Your symbol is solid! I see the "F" and the "S" used in the symbol. It's simple, yet solid, and can stand on its own.
I like the squared lettering better than the rounded.
Some have been able to fit tools or small symbols into the name and/or have made the emphasis on the word play in the slogan, which as you know, is a big deal to me.
I hope this helps you!
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You've made a big change and I like the improvement you've made to this point. Great job! The top 4 are making it difficult to choose.
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The red, white, and blue looks too much like a presidential campaign sign.
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It is Have confindence WITH Foresight. I made the same mistake in my last post too.
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