I like the choice of typeface and the contrast between FORCE and EXECUTIVE. I like the arrow in the F. There is something about the triangle that I don't like, but I can't quite pinpoint it. Would you mind making some other variations on the shape or how the F is placed in it?
#119 I really like the creative execution of this logo, especially the icon design. Would you please do some other versions? 1. One in red. 2. One in orange. 3. One in green. 4. One in black and white so that I can see how it would work in black and white usage. 5. One reversed on a black background.
Just wanted to share a kind comment I received from another contest holder...
"Hi zrox, I hope this reaches you really well. I've just seen your designs on the 'force executive' contest. I have to say, your to me seem by far the most professional/credible on there, though I realise this kind of thing is very subjective. Hope to see some of your designs! Kindly, Max G Falcon MPS"
Thank you for doing the variations. I really like this logo in color. The black and white version concerns me still. Is there anything you can think of that keeps the integrity of the design while providing enough contrast to work if we can only use one color on a shirt, on a pen, etc. The grey on the black and white version seems to fade out.