Thank you for submitting your design. Both were very creative. Here are my comments: - The use of the letter F as both a figure and in the title is probably not sending the type of message that the clientele we will be approaching will appreciate. it is very clever but not at the level of sophistication that will be needed - we would like to keep the words football logic together rather then separate them - the graphic in the ball is creative but we are trying to stay away from simply adding a football into the logo because there are already so many others that do this; we are looking for something different that still sends the message we are football serious I hope these comments help. Thanks again for submitting your design.