Can you try making the lines of the building a little more clean crisp and refined? I want to see what it looks like with a little less of a rough sketch type effect.
Man you are good! Few more tweaks.
1) Can you remove sun and out eclipse effect behind entire logo?
2) make small square building in front circular like in #33
3) make sky in #33 a night sky
Hi yes, if you look at the attachments in my brief, there are examples of an eclipse, a creative splash type background, a reflection effect as if logo was sitting on a very shinny marble floor. I don't have an example of a globe effect, but it would be interesting to see what logo would look like with a 3D globe effect.
Can you also try something where the buildings are outlines or silhouettes with shading to add depth but not filled in? Maybe even an eclipse effect with bright light shining from behind. I would also love to see renditions with black or dark colored background. Maybe a night sky with a bright eclipse effect.
Hi, can you play around with this logo some and submit a couple versions of #33 with different effects. Unfortunately i really don't know what kinds of effects to apply. I will leave that up to your creative process. thank you
Shoot I'm sorry the color is not working for me. Also I feel like the design has gotten away from what really drew me to it to begin with. Really like the font. Can you try adding another line to top of FoodUP and a semi circle around the buildings? Same features as #40 but executed in the style of current #60
Well Thank you for taking the time to accept my feedback. I hope I'm not over involved thereby limiting the creative process . Regarding this logo. I like the buildings being solid, but it's a bit too colorful. Maybe limiting to one or two colors with different shading? Also, I like the font on 39 and 40 better thank this one . Can you refer to my brief? I think the 2nd attachment is an example of font for "Proto.io" that I like. 39 and 40 were similar so if we can go back in that direction? Also can you play around with leaving the "d" open like you did with the "P" ?
Thanks for your feedback! I appreciate that you really take time to explain your vision for your logo. Please see #46 and let me know this is more in the direction of your vision. Thanks!
I think this is GREAT work. Here is my feedback:
1) I like the font of foodUP but would like to see a bit more creative touch on the "f".
2) I don't like the gray color scheme on the entire "foodUP". Maybe adding another color to the "UP"
3) As much as I like it, I don't feel like the style matches the spirit of our company which is groups being social in nature. This version of the logo feels a bit too professional with a touch of industrial. I am looking for more social, young and hip.
4) Can you try simplifying the city scape a bit. I really dig the 3D effect and depth you gave it and am wondering if a silhouette would be cool? Or even buildings colored in? Or even jagged edges applied? Just thoughts
5) Can you continue to play around with creative touches to this logo?
This is definitely in the running!
Hi, with this logo I have moved you to my number 1 ranking. Also, I accidentally left feedback for this logo on #12. Please let me know if you want me to copy the feedback here
Thank you for this version. I like it a lot, but I am worried that it might be too busy. I also don't like the font. I uploaded a couple font examples to the brief. Can we keep playing with this? Even though I like it, im unsure how I feel about the circle surrounding the words. Doesn't exactly match the feel of my app. Thoughts about shrinking the circle with city and placing to left or right of "FoodUP"?
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1) Can you remove sun and out eclipse effect behind entire logo?
2) make small square building in front circular like in #33
3) make sky in #33 a night sky
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1) I like the font of foodUP but would like to see a bit more creative touch on the "f".
2) I don't like the gray color scheme on the entire "foodUP". Maybe adding another color to the "UP"
3) As much as I like it, I don't feel like the style matches the spirit of our company which is groups being social in nature. This version of the logo feels a bit too professional with a touch of industrial. I am looking for more social, young and hip.
4) Can you try simplifying the city scape a bit. I really dig the 3D effect and depth you gave it and am wondering if a silhouette would be cool? Or even buildings colored in? Or even jagged edges applied? Just thoughts
5) Can you continue to play around with creative touches to this logo?
This is definitely in the running!
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