The lines are very clean and the wheat stalk is unique. I believe, however that this design is missing something. It's not yet strong enough to stand out. I'm looking for something that has that ineffable "iconic" feel to it.
Looking forward to your thoughts and any additional ideas.
The Logo doesn't need to be bold to be noticeable .Also I was following your directions on the Design Brief where clearly it states that your are looking for a complicated / abstract mark and not very obvious. I can still make a change to the mark to make it look more iconic and compact.
Thank you for creating some variations for me. These are a bit "sharp", and was wondering if you have any thoughts on how to soften it while maintaining a strong iconic nature. An associate commented that even the earlier versions were very thorn like in the stem.