i had posted revisions, hope you like it. I will away for today as i am on different time zone, so don't mistake me if don't reply you. And thanks for your valuable feedbacks
It's a combo of your two designs. My business partner didn't get the home and price tag concept initially so I added more sting than you had, but try some versions like this with or without the word florida, not sure if you can incorporate a real estate post in the design. my business partner didn't understand the concept i was going for here where there is a small piece being taken away from the larger commission, and didn't see that the green triangle was a representation of a house. Not sure if there is a subtle way to accomplish it better without it getting too busy. We changed the tagline, as we were finding it was not working in most logos.
There are two of your designs that may be able to be put together to create the overall concept. I will get back with you after discussing. The price tag on the left, and this one the right
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for instance, I think the string gets lost a little.
https://www.screencast.com/t/24oQqgAP
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It's a combo of your two designs. My business partner didn't get the home and price tag concept initially so I added more sting than you had, but try some versions like this with or without the word florida, not sure if you can incorporate a real estate post in the design. my business partner didn't understand the concept i was going for here where there is a small piece being taken away from the larger commission, and didn't see that the green triangle was a representation of a house. Not sure if there is a subtle way to accomplish it better without it getting too busy. We changed the tagline, as we were finding it was not working in most logos.
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