List For LessLogo Design Contest

matching your comment with this link attached (https://www.screencast.com/t/acguLXMD)

added a small readability trick :)
a very dark blue shadow under the texts. works very good for "list for less" and web domain name... not so well though for tagline ... from where i stand.

i believe in #359 i overlooked to change the smaller with less... corrected here.

please note though there are differences in the colors due to the operating system , graphic card, color display profile ...stuff like this , so it may come to slight differences in the colors i see and you get... this is unavoidable, but the final vector file will be a color match.

Uploading all three versions now :)

THis is a little rougher version, but this look where the domain name may be lighter but still readable. current website colors. The better service font should match the top though. https://www.screencast.com/t/acguLXMD

I would try all three last edit requests though (even the one where I ask just to change the "Less commission" tagline.

also try the same as I just described with a blue color closer to 0076d5

ok... getting a little feedback that its a bit too busy. lets try this logo with no domain name. lower the Main dark blue list for less a bit, and make the tag icon a little larger.. Make the tagline "LESS COMMISSION" on the top

try this version with "Less Commission" on top instead of "smaller"

Thank you. This is in contention.

and a rounded ...round version :)
text fit to the outer circle

Okay, so uploaded #355 and #356 ,
both re"circled" , bigger tagline, bigger domain , i have zoomed it down to 11% and i could still read clearly...

i will definitely try. i may have to make the main text more compact, or, to get the circle clear, to place the whole rectangle with "list for less" inside it.
I'm preparing a few examples.
thanks a lot for the feedback and your patience.

I like this logo. My business partner feels the tag is not discernible and the print is too small from a distance. I do wish this could be a true circle. Its not quite a round circle. Would making it a true circle give you a little more room to make the tag bigger or website name bigger?

this is more or less a test of readability and the 4 used instead of "for" .
Now...well...waiting to see what your thoughts are...

filled bottom.

i only left it for you to see it's a full circle... i meant it to be full.. okay so dot com same line , and lower part filled.
just need a minute

can you fill in the little white area below the web name please.

lets leave the .com on the same line

Uploaded #263 and #264 .
removed phone, larger website , and in the other entry separated dot com on another row, so the domain name is larger , more readable.
One of the entries has the lower part of the circle visible so you can see the whole circle .
Thanks a lot.

Thank you . working on it.
Some clarification is needed though .
the green part below where the domain name is is part of the complete green circle, so is not a part added. if i would remove the domain, it will look clear. i can try to separate it from the circle, and then extend it to the diameter of the circle.
I'll prepare a couple of versions , if that will look good, we'll take it from there. thanks again.

I think the domain name may be able to extend more but not all the way to the edge where the dark blue is. then extend the green partial filled circle underneath the domain name to line up with the green ring path above. not sure that will work or not...but lets try

Nice entry. Lose the phone number. I would like to see the domain name larger but I think we have some room to make that larger. Then make the bottom green part more symetrical to the green ring on the top part. so its a complete circle shape. hope that makes sense

i intentionally slipped in the phone and website , so you get a better view of the readability . I might have to remove those though ...

i'll try to come up with a simpler version ...maybe a bit more striking.
thanks for the comments .

no....too hard to get the concept driving by a sign. I have to add our website name, phone number, and brokerage name to any advertising I have...there are too many design elements with this to coordinate with the other things I need to add to a sign

thicker font ?

too hard to read when driving by a yard sign