1. The torch is a strong symbol. The typography has a clean, scholarly appearance.
2. The thin horizontal lines flanking the text may not reproduce well at small sizes (business cards, website headers, merchandise like t-shirts, etc.)
3. The negative space forming the torch handle needs better definition. Currently, it reads more as a disconnected gap rather than the intended shape of Florida.
4. Proportionally, the design is somewhat blocky and top-heavy, more modern than classical.
Could you rework the logo with these items in mind, working with more elegant proportions to reflect the institute's classical focus?
making the initial "F" combined into one of the pillars for a university building that uses the same back shape as "True North Classical" so that people can immediately understand that this is an association of that organization. and carrying fire to mean a burning spirit
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2. The thin horizontal lines flanking the text may not reproduce well at small sizes (business cards, website headers, merchandise like t-shirts, etc.)
3. The negative space forming the torch handle needs better definition. Currently, it reads more as a disconnected gap rather than the intended shape of Florida.
4. Proportionally, the design is somewhat blocky and top-heavy, more modern than classical.
Could you rework the logo with these items in mind, working with more elegant proportions to reflect the institute's classical focus?