I'm liking the fonts from luxury brands like Bentley. I still think the image for the O could better resemble a float tank without being made to look exactly like one. If you can achieve that out, this could be my favorite.
We're not communicating well. Please start with your original design. The blue was fine there. I was suggesting you use the blue for the O shape as well.
Let's focus just on the O.
1.Close in the shape of the O. It could almost look like a float pod that is 3/4 closed if you would just close the gap at the top of the O a little.
2. Match the color to the previous blue in the first design.
3, The water shape is better here, but could connect to the O shape a little better like the first entry.
The water level on the first version is better ( this is too high ), but the water image itself is getting closer. The design you sent with the image of a person was good if you remove the person. If the O is 75% closed, try 80%. I don't care for the purple and the font could be sharper?crisper?
This one is very close. The other 2 you submitted went in a different direction from what I commented here. Is there anything I am communing incorrectly?
Try to make this look like a float tank with the hatch open if you can. The O needs a tiny bit less negative space, Mybe to the 11:30 mark. I don't like the use of green. The water is too solid in form in the center of the image. Try just to continue with the ripple effect instead of a solid blue dot.
We've lost the feeling of a float tank here. The circle is too closed in now. Your original design looked very much like a float tank with the hatch open. This loses that look to me. You were 90% there with the first one.
I like the float tank image in the O. I think the circle could be closed a little more, but I like the negative space too. Please try this idea a few different ways. I really like this, but it's not quite there. The font could definitely be different. The green should change as well. If you could try a few different ways to represent the water as well. Sorry to sound demanding, but I like this quite a bit, but it's not quite my taste. Nice work
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Let's focus just on the O.
1.Close in the shape of the O. It could almost look like a float pod that is 3/4 closed if you would just close the gap at the top of the O a little.
2. Match the color to the previous blue in the first design.
3, The water shape is better here, but could connect to the O shape a little better like the first entry.