Hello David,
Feel free if you have any request revision or amnything please let me know. I'll be ready to finalize Your logo design.
Once again, many thanks for Your patience.
Can these letters be made slightly fatter? I still like this the best when I look at them together. I would like to see this on a blue background with white font.
This is cool. It would be good to see this is a few similar fonts. Sharper like Netflix's. Perhaps have a blue background with black font? Sorry if I'm asking a lot. I like this, I would like to see it a few ways
This one draws my eye when I look at all of them together. I still think the font needs to change though. Aston Martin and Bentley have the kinds of font I feel would look good here. The spacing and the size are very good. The mark through the A is also good
I like the original font better. I think a crisper font works well for the name. I like how you've spaced out the letters and accented the wave a bit more. Try another font please, but this is classic, simple, and attractive
I like this idea as well. The font is too bold. It's a relaxing spa, this is a bit too bold. I like the negative space for the O, but it needs some form in the O between the 10 o'clock to the 11:30 point. The wave/body form could start beneath the O. form the cross through the A and underline the SIS. I hope this makes sense.
Not like this. The O was fine. It could represent someone’s head if the line through the a could look like a body lying down, a water wave feel, and the a. Does that help?
This design is more of the style I like. Maybe try a few different versions with font . The O with the wave into the A could almost be interpreted as a figure floating on water as well as a wave / water form. Maybe push the image subtly in that direction. I don't want the logo to be too literal. Thanks for this,
David
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Feel free if you have any request revision or amnything please let me know. I'll be ready to finalize Your logo design.
Once again, many thanks for Your patience.
Best Regards,
Harsa Bachtiar
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I'll revise ...Thanks for suggestion. It's really helped me
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Thanks for trying so many
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Apologize for late, I just arrive at home. How about this one?
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I'll revise. Many thanks
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Many thanks for feedback, it's really helped me. Do You mean like this?
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Hope You´re having a good day.
How about this one?
Feel free if You have any suggestions, revisions or anything, Please let me know.
It will be my pleasure to work it.
Many thanks.
Best Regards,
Harsa Bachtiar