I was wondering if it is possible to cut the bottom of the pink circle with the buttom of "creamery" so that the slogan is on a completely blank background... Right now it feels a little like a doughnut shop logo.
Great feedback again, thank you. I will have to upload these later as im currently over an hour late to go to tea already (always happens on a Sunday) , but i will get those revisions up here later tonight :)
"Flavors" is not aligned to the center. Can you please:
1) Align flavors.
2) Decrease the size of the cookies and increase the size of ice cream by say 20%.
3) Give a variation of all small letters "flavors".
One more thing... Can you give it a try with all upper case? I feel the logo in the original design, but I just want flavors to stand out without having a thick circle that takes away from the idea. By the way, the original ice-cream color is more representative than the second one. And, no need for the yellow rays... this will be printed on many mediums. The cleaner, the better.
It seams off now... The original was a lot more symmetric. Can you put back the line on which you wrote the slogan, but just leave it blank. and everything back to original (circle thickness, capitalization)... The two changes from original... drop the cone and slogan. Also, the sandwich looks like a burger. Can you use cookie colors for the top and bottom?
The more I look at this, I think the cone should be dropped. Also, make the "F" in fflavors small to match everything else. Also, the other stufff I mentioned above. Thanks
I like the idea... Few comments:
1) Drop the cone or move it away from the text.
2) Make the arch big "Flavors" larger and "Creamery smaller. That is, have Flavors stand out more.
3) Drop the slogan.
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I was wondering if it is possible to cut the bottom of the pink circle with the buttom of "creamery" so that the slogan is on a completely blank background... Right now it feels a little like a doughnut shop logo.
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1) Align flavors.
2) Decrease the size of the cookies and increase the size of ice cream by say 20%.
3) Give a variation of all small letters "flavors".
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It seams off now... The original was a lot more symmetric. Can you put back the line on which you wrote the slogan, but just leave it blank. and everything back to original (circle thickness, capitalization)... The two changes from original... drop the cone and slogan. Also, the sandwich looks like a burger. Can you use cookie colors for the top and bottom?
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1) Drop the cone or move it away from the text.
2) Make the arch big "Flavors" larger and "Creamery smaller. That is, have Flavors stand out more.
3) Drop the slogan.
Very good start.