Flavors CreameryLogo Design Contest

Looking good.

Here it is.

This is good, but I think we should go back to 6 chocolate chips

And this cone is a bit larger than #170

Hello.

Here are the changes, 5 chocolate chunks on cookie and cone a bit larger on the botton than #168

Sure, will show the changes in a couple of hours :)

By the way, #168 is the one we should make the changes to.

yes, this looks better. Since you are winning the survey so far... Can you extend the cone a little bit from the bottom? Not too much, just a little. And, drop one of the chocolate chunks (5 instead of 6) and reposition them evenly.

As always, thanks

And a font variation with more spacing.

Hello.

Here is the same font but with more space between letters.

Hi Fracco,

Ca you please change the font to another one that has spaces between characters. They are too close to each other (you can possibly use the same font just put small spaces between them.

Thanks

Oh, ok... No problem... Just want you to have access to the survey in case management reverses their decision since you are still ahead.

Thanks

Sure, will friend you after the contest be completed :) Sorry again for all this mess.

Regards

Fracco

You can friend me on Facebook "Dikran Hovagimian" to follow the progress of the survey that I posted. Meanwhile, I will see what happens with admin.

Admin doesn't work on weekends so you will have to wait till monday for an answer. Sorry for all this troubles.

Thank you for your support :)

I am very pissed. I worked with you directly on this design 100% and for someone to accuse you of copying is ridiculous. I wrote a long letter to the management and am waiting for reply. Meanwhile, I shared the survery on my Facebook page. friend me on Facebook to see how you are winning.

Hope they change their mind.

Sorry about my entries had withdrawn, was not my decission, another designer accused me from copy his design, but I have my conscience clean cause you and I know we have worked on this design together.

Regards

Fracco

A bit bolder line than #155

Thinner outer brown line on Creamery.

Not interested in #152 because we do not put sprinkles on our ice cream. This one is good. Why is the blue text always appearing as more 3D than the red? Can you add more shadow to red or what is it?

Thanks

Here are the changes, please let me know if it is what you wanted to see.

Fracco

Got it, thanks for the ranking, will submit the changes asap so you can make your choice.

Regards

Since you are making the change... Please reduce the black around "CREAMERY". it's too much compared to the top image.

Thanks

Ok, made you first position. Please add a few chocolate chips to the cookie. Once done, I will start the survey and see what people prefer.

Thanks for all the hard work

Hello.

I can make the requested change, the problem is at this stage of your contest only the 1st ranked designer is available to submit new entries. If you wish to see changes from me or any other designer please switch the ranking for a while.

Regards

Thanks for this late entry.... If you are still around, can you please add a few more chocolate chips to the cookie. Not too much. Everything else the same.

Thanks again,

Much better. Will pass around for review by friends/family. Meanwhile, if you think of anything else, do not hesitate to post.

Thanks

You are half way there. the text is inside the outer orange circle (good), but it is still overlapping the inner orange circle. Can you make it fit completely in the light pink area?

Vivid color variation.

Like this one?

Ok, i think this is the best color combo. Can you make the text fix in the area between the two orange borders (maybe increase the light pink ring not to reduce the text font size)

Thanks

All right, here are some variations, please let me know your thoughts about them.

Thanks for the feedback.

By the way, I forgot to mention, I prefer the light pink background inside the "O" and "C". The black does not look good.

All the distances and text are good. Only thing is the background. Something is not sitting right... Maybe too many colors. Can you try something different for the background. It's taking away from the actual design.

Also, can you reduce the black shadow size a little. Try half or 2/3 of the current size..

As always, thanks.

hi... Thanks for the changes. I think I was not clear. I like the white outline around the text. That's not a problem. I wanted an orange circle inside the light pink ring (between light and dark pink) and the text sits on top of the light pink are between the two orange rings. Makes sense?

Also, my friend insists that the "O" and "C" should have black inside color instead of the background pink. Can you please make one variation with that?

Thanks

This looks much better.. Just a few changes please:
1) Can we move the text a little more to the outside? Maybe add an orange ring on the inside next to the light pink just like the outside orange ring and put the text in that area... What do you think? That will leave some distance.
2) Can you fill the openings in the "O" and "C" with the background pink color instead of the current white?

Thanks a lot.

Here is a new one with different font, I keep the distance between the images and the letters. Hope you like it.

Also, can you leave a little distance between the images and the letters. The black shadow is right against the images. Or, possibly remove the black shadow and just keep the white outline.

Thanks

Thanks for the update... Looking nice. A couple off things:
1) Please use a different font where the letters are not cramped up against each other.
2) Please use a cone for the ice cream scoop because the cup looks kind of odd.

Hope this comes out nicer.

Thanks for the update... Looking nice. A couple off things:
1) Please use a different font where the letters are not cramped up against each other.
2) Please use a cone for the ice cream scoop because the cup looks kind of odd.

Hope this comes out nicer.

Couldn't wait till tomorrow :D

Hope you like it.

Just so that you know, I dont mind an outline on the fonts to make it stand out. I dont want to restrict your talent. I just want it to be readable from a distance.

Thanks

Got it, will return with the changes first hour tomorrow.

Regards

Since the contest is blind, here is what I like.. Of course, your vibrant colors are impressive. That's the good part. The bad is:
1) I need to print this on multiple media, so a single color font per word would work best for me (e.g. flavors is read and creamery is dark navy).
2) Easier to read font from a distance and all caps is preferred.
3) Add a single scoop ice cream cone (tilted) or cup next to the cookie overlapping a little bit (do your magic).
3) Single color background behind the cookie & cone/cup.
4) Keep flavors larger than creamery.

Hope this helps.

Thanks for the changes... Still too cartoonish. I hope we can get something a little more main stream. This will be a sign on the store, print on shirts, mugs...

Thanks

How about this one?

Thanks... interesting idea. Can we try the cookie without eye and white color ice cream. Also, "creamery" is standing out more than "Flavors"... I really wish to see Flavors standout.

Thanks for the feedback, here is a new one, please let me know if there are changes you wish to see in order to improve the design.

Regards

Fracco

I just looked over your other designs, they are amazing. I hope we can do something great here.

By the way, I dont need a slogan for the logo.

Thanks for the logo... The font reminds me of Las Vegas slots... The cookie from a distance looks like a muffin.

hope we can improve on it.

Thanks