You have many solid submissions and your talent, uniqueness and character development are phenomenal. It undoubtedly gives you an edge over the competition. Specific suggestion? Not yet. I'm getting additional feedback from "fresh eyes" as all the artists here are truly making this decision extra hard!
I'm not familiar with the terminology character vs iconic text, but the sparkles are unique and fascinating. gives a nice fresh "new look" feel, speaks to the service the company provides. A nice touch for sure, thank you.
Haha, it's funny you opened his mouth and started showing teeth. I was just noticing that all the highest contenders are showing teeth. I think that was a great call.
Also, I'm advising everyone against the slogan as it doesn't add value. This will allow more focus on other elements.
I appreciate how your monkey is balancing so many tasks. Both takes on the monkey I feel like he is smirking though, as opposed to smiling. Might be his eyes/eyebrows? Can we get him more sincere? Also, "Daddy" in yellow didn't do it for me.
revision
change the peach color to shade of purple.
make the background little bit brighter.
and give a accent purple color on text.
what do you thing?
any other suggestion?
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any suggestion for this entry?
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simplified and more dynamic
you can use text separately without mascot.
any other suggestion?
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Also, I'm advising everyone against the slogan as it doesn't add value. This will allow more focus on other elements.
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more dynamic and blend between character and iconic text
what do you thing.?
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what do you thing?
any suggestion?
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I made alternative character on entry #27
please check it out.
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change the peach color to shade of purple.
make the background little bit brighter.
and give a accent purple color on text.
what do you thing?
any other suggestion?
B 1st rgd, mbahdjoyo
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you can use mark tools to give more information about detailed revision.
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I made some revision on entry #15
please take a look.
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any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision.
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