I prefer Entry 5 and 2 over the other two. I don't think black works well with the brand. I also would like to see more power from the colors: gold, yellow, and orange. The fonts seem to be too light for the statement we want to make of power and strength. I would like to seem more with the font....more movement. This is an athletic technology so it should have a presence. I would like to see something that does not include the slogan.
I like the font on #9. I am wondering what it would look like to put the words through the middle of the art so that the art is only on the top and bottom of the words. I like the icon's idea but I'm thinking it could be more simple. I am thinking of the power of the apple or the nike symbol..... Another idea would be to play on the N in each word, so FITNESS is horizontal and MANDALA (sharing the N) goes vertical with the image in the lower right quadrant...maybe inclosed in a circle?
I got inspired and uploaded a lot of ideas. The last of them are based on the flower of life which is a mandala itself, also represent in some way the Vitruvian man which I made to look more obvious with the droplets.
Looking forward for your ideas, suggestions, feedback!
Regarding #5, I'd like to see more from the image. It's very still and I'd like to see movement and power.I do like the font and that its on the right side
My apologies for the late respond. I'm away from home and am using mobile internet connection to connect. Now I have a net spot and will upload the requested revisions asap.
sure that is not a problem, a black and white version is easy to create. But I am currently on the way home and I don't have access to my computer. As soon as I get home I will upload the requested file.