I like the font you used for the slogan. Can you try a couple others just for comparison. Also the word "With" should start with a lowercase "w". Thank you!
Separately than the above, can you also try the word GIVING with slightly more letter spacing. I'm sorry if this is confusing :)...just trying to see different combinations.
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