FIT SFLogo Design Contest

Nailed it. The white line seems to pronounced though when I compare it to the 2nd place contributor. His seems a bit blurred out. Defined but not so defined. I guess I can play with the setting on the shadows once I receive the original file.

Is it like entry #183

Too thick on the white shadow. It's a fine line. We think the font in the tagline is better though than that used prior. However, again the white line needs to be finer. It's eating into the font of the tagline making the letters appear thinner.

Please check my new entry

Can u see second place?

In my tagline using BankGothic Md BT font and FitSF with Ethnocentric font. thank you

In short the number 2 guy outlined the entire logo with a thin white outline. That suttle change makes it pop. Then he enlarged BE MORE DO MORE with the same font you used to go across the entire bottom of FITSF. Except he did BE MORE in black and DO MORE in red. Same colors you used.

I'm going with your design. Is there a way I can end this contest now? Also, I have a web designer working on my site. She's asking me to find out the font name your using in my tagline. Someone else used the same font as you on my tagline but I think he used it better. Once you're declared the winner can I email you what he did? There scuttle changes that I think would look great your work

Much better

It lifts his chest up, because holding the heavy burden may seem like a pregnant person, I'll revise later.

3 people had mentioned that the lifter looks pregnant

Sinister.

I just left you a comment on another. I like the color of black your using now

Just take the lifter out of this one and color the sf. Shadow the tag line

Looks good too but the SF need to stand out. I hate being in the middle of all this. I hate asking u to do this and that. Someone asked if u can do one with the F all black. Leave the color on SF. I like the soft black you have here though

Without glare

Again, Can you do aware with the glare and go gradient on the SF to a soft black

Too light on the shadow but we can work on that in the future :) I played around with the logo and set it in a sphere. I then expanded the center of the logo in the center to make it appear as if was wrapped around. It actually looked pretty cool

Please check the entry #140 #141 #142 #143

And can u present it without the glare and with a more reddish orange. Don't go too orange though.

Perhaps even shadow the interior] of the weightlifter?

Can you shadow this one better please. The shadow of the s is over the t. And the shadow overall is just off. Please make the shadow also look like it's doesn't have an outline. It's too defines. Needs to be softer. Thanks

Last request. Please shadow this one also with the white border as u did the others you just submitted

Please check entry #134 and #135

I like this one. Can u shadow tag line and make it like you did with #130?

No dumbbells. Too cliche ;)

Please update new my entry

Did you get my feedback on the other?

this is probably the only one that needs no corrections. However, I would like to see another version with a shadow.
I like how the tagline is set spread as so. Should the tagline be on the bottom though? Also, can I see the SF in red. A gradient decent to a soft black. And can you take the F of "fit" and change separate the top part of the f from the letter f itself. Color that part black. If you don't understand what I meanGoogle image the FILA logo. Remember the FILA sneakers? This is really well done though.

Wow