Fit In The CityLogo Design Contest

The feedback I'm getting is the are seeing the name as Fit In and not the entire name. Needs to be seen as Fit In The City with the first visual

What I see in the picture to the left of the wording is SF and makes me think of San Francisco

Thank you Viki. Would you be able to "soften" it a little? It is edgy, but just a little more intense than I think we are looking for.

Hi,
If you have any other suggestions, please feel free to tell me. I am ready to work.

Regards,Viki

Maybe the tall I could be a weight

The tall I is confusing. Show logo in red and black we added a slogan so see you you can incorporate that

Hi,

Thank you for rating. If you have any suggestions, please feel free to tell me. I am ready to work.

Regards,Viki

Hi dear CH fedback is welcome.

Tnks Viki