I do not like the multicolored double outline of the letters in entry # 2. The single white outline in entry # 1 is better. For the slogan on the bottom I like the font used in Entries #1 and #2 because it is easier to read.
Hi.. Thank you so much for feedbacks.. that will be very helpfull for get the logo like what you want.. I'm not curious, do you like detail women figure or more abstract silhoute? Thank you
Thank you very much for submitting the logos. Yes we like less detail and more abstract silhouette I posted a few general comments on the main page. Can you see those comments?
Hello. I noticed I had 2 files called colors.png so I went through and deleted the photos that were least useful. It's important that we use some of bright green color from that photo.
Also we need to stick to the shape of the sign "old sign with feisty.jpg"... The letters on the left, the logo on the right, and the slogan below.
We can go back to using the circle rather than oval.
The silhowette should have less detail. Either like the black shadows in one picture I attached, or like the pink and green running girl in the other picture I attached.
I hope this is helpful. Thank you for working so hard on this!
Entry number 16 is tremendous progress. Thanks you! Please zoom in on the woman so she can be made out better from a distance. Just show her head and upper torso. I also think we will want to mix in a third color like the bright blue that is in the color.png that I attached to the brief. Again thank you very much. We are making great progress.
Entry # 19. Good job Appatently we would like to replace the purple with pink. The lighter color will help the silhowette stand out better. The silhowette is somewhat too husky looking so we want to make her waist look thin, a more cartoon like figure that shows an obviously thin body.
Hello again.. Dear Feisty.. Thank you so much for your continue feedbacks, that really help for understand the logo that you want..:) update for your request #29, #30, #31 hopeness you like.. and if you need other adjustment please let me know.. Thank you
Can we please see what it will look like with gray "&" and gray slogan, and Green "Feisty"? Also now that we have removed the background of the silhouette, I think we like purple instead of pink.
Can we also see what entry # 40 will look like on a white background, black sihlowette
Thank you for all the entries. You were the first to submit and have the most entries so we prefer to work with you if we can come to a final design. The woman in entry#40 is close but we want to achieve a more feminine look. I think adding facial features like mouth, nose and long eyelash will help. It may require turning her head a little more so you can see the profile of those features. Also please bring her right arm in a little so it doesn't stick out so far. Also please make the pony tail much longer and have it curl up in the back.
Dear Fitnfeistyokc.. Thank you so much for your feedback and respect.. and my apologise I just read your comment.. Happy New Year 2015.. sure I'll make the change..with pleasure Thank you
Hello again.. here my update #75 : change with nose, mouth, long eyes.. #76 :close up the change with circle #78 : change with nose, mouth, long eyes with a little small dumble.. #77 : close up #78 with a little small dumble and change the circle #79 : close up without circle about color adjustment and font threatment no matter I'll pleasure for change if you need Thank you
Getting closer and thank you! It still seems to a slightly masculine look and we think it is the jaw line. Can you please adjust the jaw line to make it more petite and feminine and add exaggerated eye lashes and extend the pony tail even more? Aps want to get font and colors similar to entry 25 if possible. Almost there thank you!
Except the silhouette in 25 should be purple and background should be black. And the general shape of the entire logo should be more like our old sign which is something entry 49 accomplishes very well.
Thank you for your entries. We are disappointed to see that you have withdrawn. Your entries had the best female body shape. If we could have just worked on the face a little more we would have ended the contest with your entry. We hope you come back in. If you do, a softer chin on the girl may help.
Hi again.. my apologise, when I'm feel I have no chance I thing better for withdrawn my entries. I'm feel all design now have same posed,one hand one hand on her waist and onelifted barbel.