Hi,
Thanks for your submissions! Both seem to have captured the idea of movement. Of the two, I prefer #2. I love the clever placement of the motto. I'd like to see a little more work on the symbol, though. The characer (not easily recognized at first) appears trapped, and attempting to escape. Also, though the color choice is appealing, I'd like to see other options. Finally, the rounded edge at the bottom of the "N" in "NY" just doesn't resonate with me.Can we try a sharper edge? On the whole, this is a strong entry. Thank you