FITLogo Design Contest

Hello, any feedback on this one ? - #133

Please check #127 - Less "strict" FIT typeface, you can now see every sentence, it's even minimally highlighted with little bit darker green, changed font for bistro & raw bar, and added DL

for the DL replacing the maybe with they typo https://www.davidlloyd.be/clubs/brussels. Just the Upper D from David and one L or upper L and lower l within like in their logo...

Will try other fonts for bistro & raw bar

Sure, will do. :)

i don't like the typo of bistro & raw bar...

as the club is davidlloyd could you try a version with DL (david lloyd) instead of the?

Thank you, glad you like it. Sure! will do that soon. :)

still de "fit" typo coul be less strict as the background is...

i like that green

i like it a lot can you make sure we can read every sentence a least once

Please check #116 #117 #118 #119 - with the small "THE" and different colours . It's kinda impossible to make big, flipped 45°, easily readable text in that situation. The only way to make it readable is to make endless text from side to side, for example please check at the bottom left corner of FIT square, you see half word of STRONG begins in one side (STRO) and ends in another (top corner) with (ONG) . I hope you understood what i did say.

it's better but making it so small will make unreadable on a logo style i think

i would love to see this heavy full of text background balanced with a bit of freshness at the center (The Fit part)

#108 how about this one?

FIT takes too much place and the police is too simple

I still can't read any of the sentences behind....

the name is the fit

Hey, please check #99 #100 , and choose which one background text looks better for you, if still you want more readable text, feel free to ask. According to LT rules i can't copy any of other designers work, but i can do some alternatives to mine. and please explain what do you mean by saying "could you ad in small somewhere the (for the Fit)" ?

could you ad in small somewhere the (for the Fit)

Could you try the center of the logo (fit part) more like ranking 6 and 8th from my ranking

i think i prefer the text in digonal just like this one! let's try to get the text in the background more readable

COOL THKS

Sure, working on it! Will submit soon. :)

maybe some sample also with a bit of a light color (light or dark blue, green or grey) on the backround text ....like the part: more daily often etc

nice could you make the backround text more readable please all the sentence now we see worry worry worry :)

Thank you! Glad you like it. Please check #59 #60. Also feel free to ask for changes. Would love to work together. :)

the sport club is very chic as you can see from the link to the sport club web page...

the best one so far! looks good, could you make some sample with the square containing FIT smaller and the text in the background more readable and also a version with the text aligned