First Presbyterian Church Florence AlabamaLogo Design Contest

Added a comma between Florence and Alabama, Thank you.

I will do it soon, any else?

One additional request. Can you also do a version of this Logo with a comma between Florence and Alabama, So it would look like Florence, Alabama. Thank you!

updated on #164 Thank you.

sure will change soon. Thank you.

Nyoba, thank you for your patience. I believe we have decided to go with this logo with one minor change. If you could make the heart without the white border in #156 we will be done. Thank you again!

nice

maybe this is my best brush, sorry if it's not as you expected

updated brush for cross symbol and heart based feedback on #154. For the hand, I am not sure how the brush should be applied. Thank you.

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Nyoba

Hello,

Thank you, Sorry for delay reply your feedback. I will try to update, and I will submit the proposal soon after the file is ready. Thank you.

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Nyoba

The brush strokes are going out on the heart and the hand toward the edges instead of a natural stroke. I was imagining more of a heart that looked painted by a brush with two strokes, if that makes sense. You really have been doing a wonderful job and have been so responsive, I really want to commend you for your effort and willingness to work with us. Thank you for all you have done. Right now we do have a survey out, so we will know more in a day or so. Thanks

updated "in" lowercase on #155 #156 #157 thank you

Thank you, I'll notify our group so they can review.

Can you make the 'in" lowercase? Thanks

Can you make the "in" lowercase? Thanks

Can you make the 'in" lowercase? Thanks

updated on #154, sorry for take a long time. my bad its hard to make brush to be a shape in digital.

Thank you

I will try to update, After ready will submit soon. Thank you.

Can we see how it would look if both the heart and the hand had the same brush stroke technique as the cross? Right now it almost looks like two different logos being pushed together.

This one is my favorite. I like the window around the cross/heart/hand because it can also be a stand alone image that is easily recognized and associated with FPC. I also feel like the cross in this image goes better with the heart/hand than the brush stroke cross. The font is much easier to read than the original as well.

I have uploaded two more pictures to show additional aspects of our Church that you might want to consider. We have a 200 year history and would like our design to reflect that while being current and contemporary.

I will withdraw immediately this entry if complained by another designer,

Too busy looking. Can you provide us something without the cross, heart, and hand; featuring the stained glass picture. Thanks.

Hello,

Thank you for your feedback. I just thought if l make new design using attachment picture, the outcome will the similar with xyan proposals. Beside that, since blind phase l don't have that proposal, maybe based on designer attitude is not good enough. I hope you understand my situation. Thank you.

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Nyoba

We are very interested in your current designs but could you offer us something different, perhaps using the picture we submitted?

Hello,

Please let me know if you need any revisions. Thank you.

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Nyoba

Hello,

Thank you for your feedback in my design. I have updated some entries, you can check them. Thank you.

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Nyoba

Thank you for providing this view. Yes, we are trying to be conscientious to the various ways our logo might be used in determining our best choice. Again. appreciate your expertise!

We like this new orientation of the logo, however we don't necessarily like the treatment of Florence Alabama and the box around it. Can you play with some alternatives. Thank you!

Black and white logo is needed for various purposes, beside that of course more cheaper cost on printing. flexible in any solid color

Hello,

Thank you for your feedback, some entries updated you can check them. Feel free if you need another revisions. Thank you.

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Nyoba

I forgot, can you please lowercase "to" and "in", in the Learning to Live Together in Christ.

On this design, we'd like to see some options without the circle border and without the light blue background. So a little more freeform. Also, can you try some more traditional looking crosses, something less "cartoon-looking"? Finally, maybe try a few different colors for the cross, ie: black, brown. Thank you!

Hello and thank you again for your continued submissions. With this design (#92) we had a few ideas we'd like for you to try. First, can we see a version where the cross is less "cartoon-looking" and more traditional (maybe straight up?). Also can we see a few different background color options (solid not a fade). Thank you!

Exploring Alabama map in the logo because the included in the name of church and I think this is important.

update font to modern style. Please let me know if you need any revision. Thank you.

That is not a problem at all. We really like the new designs and they are some of our front-runners. We really appreciate how well you have listened to our feedback and how you have been very responsive. Thank you!

Hello,

sorry for delay, I slept when you gave feedback. I have updated some entries based on your request, you can check them. Thank you.

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Nyoba

Giving some more thought to this design and talking with a few more individuals, we wanted to see a version of this logo where the heart and the cross are different colors. So that they look more distinct and separate. Hoping this will help them stand out more. Thank you again for listening to our feedback and providing great designs options in return.

New shape update

hands updated on #45 #46 thank you

Thank you for taking our feedback, Nyoba. We were wondering if there was a different option for the hands, perhaps one where the fingers are not pointing up? Maybe one where all the fingers are in the shape of the heart? Again, thank you for your time and talent.

Hello,

Entries updated, you can check them. Know, Your contest in blind phase, and only you can see all entries, after blind over, go to finalist phase where all designer able to see all entries, then selection to select the winner. But, if you want to complete early your contest, you can contact the admin. Thank you.

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Nyoba

Thank you for your submission. We really like your design and would like to keep this one as one of our main options, however I did want to possibly see if you'd consider designing some others based off this one with a few tweaks. Maybe could we see one design where the cross is moved up and replaces the sun? Then maybe another where the heart is more prominent and the state of Alabama removed and the cross moved up to replace the sun? Another design I was thinking was where the heart would be made out of two hands and maybe the cross is inside the heart made by the hands. Or if any new thoughts come to mind, we'd love to see anything else you come up with. We appreciate the thoughtfulness of your designs and can tell you have read and understood our church and what message we are trying to get across.

Hello,

Please let me know your thought about this concept, feel free if you need revisions, or if you want to give suggestion is welcome. Thank you.

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Nyoba

Hello,

Please let me know your thought about this concept.Cross symbol on the Alabama map, with two figure shaped heart (love) and sun rays on the top. Feel free if you need any revisions, or if you have suggestion is welcome. Thank you.

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Nyoba