#12) A bit too traditional/conservative. We are trying to stress that we are a growing church with new direction, not an older church focused on the past. That being said ... I do like your design and appreciate the creative thought of documenting a stainglass window.
#11) Same thought as number12. A bit too conservative. I do like that you tried to make the stainglass window more alive and fresh. A creative approach to bringing vitality to tradition.