#1 Like circular shape and horizon. FCD gets lost on background. Color for "FIRST" hard to read. Logo does not depict the fund raising aspect which ALL they do.
Entry # 8 was incorrectly listed on first comment as #1. (Like circular shape and horizon. FCD gets lost on background. Color for "FIRST" hard to read. Logo does not depict the fund raising aspect which ALL they do.)
Entry # 1 Like the 3 vertical lines and thought it might be the top of the number "1" (serif) but not sure if that is the intent. Is that a person or a dragon? Again the logo needs to represent their primary business as described in the brief.