Looks great, thanks! I like all the changes you made. The background looks really good too. Would you just try and expand the size of the background, so that it is larger than the elephant, and free forming, not as square. If it can flow in and out without regularity, I think it will look more like a scene. Other than that, I wouldn't change anything. We're very excited with what you have created!
Let's work with the your #83. I really like some of the colors and features. I love the shading on the forehead. It is exactly what I'm looking for. If you can do some darker shading on him, I think he will look more authentic. Please try shading his left side, our right, in a darker grey, next to the outline. The red line on the inside of his left ear is too red, and too clearly defined. Any darker shading on his body, and the surrounding scene, will just enhance his look. Can you paint the whole background in a very light taupe. I think it will mute, the overall impression. These are not criticisims, merely suggestions, to improve the final product. I really like what you have produced, and I think we can wrap this up quickly. Thanks for your responses, and all your efforts!
Hey Jim! That's great! thanks for your feedback it was really helpful.
Here are 3 new color schemes, I think they are well mixed and harmonic now.
Let me know your thoughts
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I just got a hold of my daughters colored pencils, which makes me real dangerous. I hope though, that it can convey what I'm trying to express in words. Hope it helps!
I like the direction. Just a few changes, and I think we are there. Try 2 horizontal lines on each side of ranch, instead of 3. I like the definition, just toned down slightly. Also, I am uploading a pic of the elephant that I roughly shaded. I like the color of the elephant, and the red, but both are too clearly defined. I think the elephant, and his surrounding area should be muted, and shaded, without clear definition. Try using some darker taupes, in and around him to blur the Image a bit. Perhaps you use a light grey, or light taupe background over the whole logo, so that there is not such a shop contrast. You can do a much better job than I can, but I was just trying to convey a less defined scene, and elephant. Look forward to your input. Thanks,
Jim
Hello again maddawn, I already made the new options but in this stage of the contest only the ranked # one can upload designs, If you want to see my proposals let me know.
Hi maddawn! Sure thanks for your feedback, right now I'm out of the office, just give me some time to upload the New designs as soon as I'm back in the computer. Many thanks!
Can you do a little broader outline of the red on the elephant, and put a little more of the green and gray around the elephant as background, to create a little more of a scene. Then use the red as the color for the lettering in Firesong, and ranch. The fostering harmony can be in the black or gray, whatever you think looks best. Many thanks
Elephant looks fine. Would you outline the elephant in the red that you used on the I in firesong. No change in the bacground colors, just adding the red outline. Thanks!
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Take a look, some new shading and background, also #89 have another shape for the background and color.
I have to use the 3 lines instead of 2 because that was a other designer idea.
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Take a look, some new shading and background, also #86 have another shape for the background and color.
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Here are 3 new color schemes, I think they are well mixed and harmonic now.
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I just added some little details, hope you like it, if you want to see more options or request any variations just let me know.
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I'm asking because the platform have some rules ( it can't be a internet picture) only if have free rights.
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Let me know what do you think!
Hope you like them.
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