FineLine PoolsLogo Design Contest

Hi there. This is my take on your logo.
Feedback and comments are welcome.

Thanks.
-Ted

Hi Ted,
I like the concept very much so thank you.

I would be very interested to see some other versions utilizing the tile concept. Have a look at one of my updates regarding a tiled pool look.

I would appreciate it if you could let me know if what I am asking is possible. In short I was asking for the company name to be in tiles, (Like the tiles in you great logo) and for a rectangle around the entire name. (Imagine enlarging your rectangle in your logo).

As I said in my updated brief I am not sure if this would be aesthetically pleasing so with a little feedback would be very helpful.

Best wishes
David

Hi David. Thank you for the prompt feedback and the ranking. Much appreciated.

I can definitely try and recreate what you're specifying, but in my opinion I think the name might look as if it was "pixelated". Also in order for the letters to be clearly readable I'm going to shrink the size of the tiles a little bit more. However, I will work on this right now. I hope I'm wrong about my assessment.

I'll submit my revision in a little bit. Thanks again!

Cheers
Ted

Thanks Ted,
Have a look at one of your designs, (Heres Fish). The tiles you have created there is what I was imagining.

I am taking on board your comments and I understand what you are saying so thank you. If it is possible, and you can make it look even better than your others submission, it is important that the tiles are not so fine that it is beyond the resolution of a reasonable consumer brand home printer.

Again thank you,
Best wishes
David

Please take a look at #127 and #128. Let me know your thoughts.

Thanks again
Ted

Thanks Ted

Well you were right, they do look pixelated. Sorry for wasting your time.

I still prefer your first version. If you have any other ideas I would love to see them.

Cheers
David

I don't see it as a waste of time. I kinda wanted to make sure of how it would look. Now we know, heheh.
Yeah, if I can come up with other ideas I'll definitely submit them.

Cheers mate.
Ted

Thanks Ted,
Your new submission all look great. During the next stage I will be getting other opinions to help me with my final decision.

I like all versions for various reason however from a designers perspective I would also like your opinion based on my original brief.

Cheers
David

I definitely agree. And I think #131 and #133 look great. When I first read the brief and I saw that note you added about your idea for a birds eye view of a pool I immediately thought of the graphic you see in #131. It sort of condenses the idea into a very likeable logo. It has a very upscale likeness to it.

Let me know if you have further comments. I'm enjoying working on your logo.

Cheers
Ted

Thanks Ted

Cheers
david

Hello Ted

Due to some issues I have to change the name of my company. Would you please change the name to Bespoke Pools. Bespoke means, made to order which describes what I do. When you change the name could you also try a few different fonts.

If the new name gives you any other ideas for a new design I would like to see them

I am sorry for the inconvenience, it is unfortunately unavoidable

Best wishes
David

Hi David. It's no problem. I'll rework my design right now.

Thanks!

Thanks Jason these look great.

It is very hard to choose, I have been getting very strong responses from people for your logo and the other the other top 2 ranked logos.

If you can think of any variations or new designs that may be more suitable for the new word I would love to see them.

Cheers
David