FineLine PoolsLogo Design Contest

Hello Green
Thank you for your great designs.
Would you mind modifying #14 by removing the circle shape and enlarging the font.

Best wishes
David

thanks melbourne for u comment
and this comment reference entry#36 or #37

i hope u like it

regards
green

Thanks Green.
I also wanted you to remove the F so that we only have the FineLine Pools font with the two lines on either side of pools.
Thanks again,
David

updated #39, #40, #41, #42

Thanks Green,
As I mentioned in my previous post I also want the water gone so that all I have is the font.

So just take away the waves in #41.

Thank you

updated #51, #52

Hi Green,
Thank you for the updates. I really like #51.

Now for the tricky part.

I would like to see an abstract image of a person swimming above the word FineLine on the left side.

1: Take the two wavy line on #36 and remove only the rectangle shape under the dark blue line.

2: You will notice the top of the F look a bit like a swimmers arm coming out of the water.

3: Add a dark red oval shape on the left side of the arm to create the swimmers head.

4: Now line up the wavy dark blue line with the left side of the dark blue E.

5: The right side of the dark blue wavy line should line up with the right side of the light blue E

If you don't understand please ask as many questions as you like.

Thank you Green
Best wishes
David

Hello Green.

Just a quick correction from my last post.

The swimmer is to be located on the right side.

Best wishes
David

updated #65, #66, #67, #68

updated #69, #70

Hello Green,

You are getting close with #66

1: The swimmer should be on top of the word FineLine.
2: The arm needs to be shortened a little and made a little more realistic.
3: Move the dark blue wavy line a little closer to the light blue wavy line.
4: Drop the head so that it is almost touching the dark blue wavy line.
5: Change the red head angle so it looks like it is laying on a pillow.

These are just my ideas to make the swimmer more realistic.
Please feel free to make it look more like a swimmer.

If you can get this right it will be my favorite design so far.

Good Luck

Hello Green
Entry #72 is getting close and I have ranked it 1st.

The arm still needs to be a little shorter and thinner so it looks like an arm. Can you see how the arm ant shoulder looks to big?

As mentioned in my other two posts I would like the swimmer located to the right side over the word (line).
The swimmer and dark blue line should be made a little bit smaller so that it sits over the two E.

Again we just need to make the swimmers body look more realistic.

Thanks again.

updated #77, #78

updated #79, #80

Hello Green #79 and #80 are looking good.

The swimmer still need some slight improvements but I will now leave it up to you to make any adjustments to make the logo perfect.

Thank you for all your efforts and well done.

Best wishes
David

Hello Green #79 and #80 are looking good.

The swimmer still need some slight improvements but I will now leave it up to you to make any adjustments to make the logo perfect.

I also like #31 #32 and #51 so please don't withdraw them.

Thank you for all your efforts and well done.

Best wishes
David

Hi Green,
Changed my preference to #77 and #78.

There looking good.

Thank you.

Thanks Green,
I will take a look at these new designs

Hello Green,

On #77 could you please move the light blue wavy line down so that it connected along its length to the dark blue line.

Thank you
Best wishes
David

Hello again Green,

When you move the light blue line as described in the previous post could you also change the light blue colors to color #00aeef and the dark blue color to #00458a.

Thank you
David

updated #122, #123, #124, #125

Thanks Green these are great.

I may still go back to the original dark blue but don't worry about it now. We can make the final small changes in the next stage.

Well done, I really love your work

Best wishes
David

updated #134, #135

Thanks Green,
#135 looks great.

Hi Green,
Could you also make the same changes to #77. I may still go with this design.

Thanks
David

updated #137

Thanks Green,

Can you make the swimmer in #135 a tiny bit smaller and then place it in the middle like #78.

Thank you green.

updated #153, #154, #155

Hello Green

Due to some issues I have to change the name of my company. Would you please change the name to Bespoke Pools. Bespoke means, made to order which describes what I do. When you change the name could you also try a few different fonts.

If the new name gives you any other ideas for a new design I would like to see them

I am sorry for the inconvenience, it is unfortunately unavoidable

Best wishes
David

Updated #161, #162

Thanks Green,
These look great.

Instead of the tick in the O could you fill it with fine waves and change the O and K back to dark Blue.

I would also like to see a couple of Font variations to see if Bespoke looks better in a new font.

Thanks Green

updated Font #163, #164, #165, #166, #167, #168, #169, #170

updated #171, #172, #173, #174

Nice variations Green,
Using light blue I was actually wanting the entire inside of the O filled with fine wavy lines. In must be contained completely inside the O with no overlap.

I like some of the new fonts you have used so I may change.

Thank very much for all your work you have been fantastic.

Best wishes
David

updated #183, #184, #185, #186

Thank you Green

Hello Green,
I have included a link below and I was wondering if you have available the same font. If you look closely it looks like it is composed of outlines.
I also like the simplicity of this logo design and I am wondering if it is possible to come up with a simular concept perhaps useing very fine wavey lines instead of straight line. You have already done a logo for me without the swimmer so it would jjust be a matter of adding a dark blue background, the fine wavey lines and the thin frame.

Of cause we must under no circumstances infringe on somebody elses copyright so it must be different enough to insure there are no problems.

http://www.bespokeapproach.com/en/default.aspx

Best wishes David

updated #190, #191, #192, #193, #194

Thanks Green,
Great idea really love what you did with #190.
I think we have just about got it exactly right.

Thanks for doing the other examples but I think #190 is the best.

Hello Green,

I really like #190. At this stage as a designer is there anything else you think needs to be done to improve the design and make it look more prestigious and really show high quality.
You are the expert so I would be happy to hear or see any suggestions.

Best wishes
David

Hello Green,
When I printed the logo the pools and two lines were to dark and were difficult to see. Could you please make them a little lighter and make the pools slightly larger.

Thanks
David

updated #195, #196
other #197, B W (black n white ) version #198

Hi Green
The Pools is a bit to big.

How do I send you a picture of exactly what I want?

maybe you can send private messages to me, so that I can reciprocate

updated #199

Thank you Green

Pools is the right size. Lines too thick. Can you make the same size as before

updated #200, #201

#200 is good.

Now can you make the two white lines and the Pools very light blue.

Can you also drop the two lines and Pools a little bit. Only a very small amount.

updated #202, #203

Hello Green,

They need to be light blue. The blue is still to dark

updated #204, #205, #206, #207