Financial Planning ConceptsLogo Design Contest

#7 - I really like the logo mark (the swirly lines) but the type is hard to read. Maybe if the type was to the right of the mark, larger and arranged on 2 lines.
#9 - : I really like the logo mark but the type treatment is not satisfying. Maybe a serifed font and ditching the tagline would work.

jmarc,

thank you for feedback. here are updates: #25 #26 #27 #28
please let me know if you need revision or any directions.

regards,
viar

On #26 could you put the words on the right side of the picture. Is there anything you can do to make the tagline more readable. The text ends up being very small.

In terms of my last comment, it would look like #9 with a different picture.

thanks for feedback but sorry its in judging mode already now. unable for me to submit new design