Hi jen&mary.
Sorry to say, but your first layout is completely dead. All our competitors have a filmreal and a CD in theri logo, if any. However I like your slogan. We are going international, so this might work.
Than you for your work so far. Second layout is a little bit unpersonal. Our company name is a little bit dull, so it is actually OK to use the abbrivation FFP. We hang on to the company-name because of a 30 years experience....
Kind regards JW