I made a markup here pointing to the spot that I'm talking about. The shape of the "s" is perfect, so don't change the shape. I just want that spot to be less thick. Try removing one pixel from that curved area and let's see how that looks.
Yes, this is much better. The bottom curl in the "s" seems just a pixel or two too thick. Also, please make BOUTIQUE a straight line, like your previous one.
I love this! Can you submit a variation of this, without the part marked up in red? Also, add a little more to the tail of the "s" like I have indicated in the markup.
Can you submit a variation of this, where you remove the part highlighted in red? I am looking for somethin a little cleaner, with fewer cursive strokes. Also, can you move "BOUTIQUE" down a little bit and over to the left?
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Submitted some so you can compare.
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João
Yes sure I can. Submitted already so you can appreciate.
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I see what you mean, It´s fixed that part so it can be more balanced. Let me know if it´s all good now.
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João
No problem at all. I happy you like with the revisions.
I´ve submitted a few more variations on the "S" so you can compare.
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João
I´m happy you like this variation! Also some of the letters are manipulated by me what makes the logo unique.
Submitted revisions so you can compare. If you need anything else just let me know.
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João
Hope you´re having a great day.
Thank you for your great feedback. I´m glad you like my logo concepts.
Submitted a few variations for your appreciation, please check and let me know what do you think.
If you need changes feel free to ask please.
Your feedback is always welcome.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João