Fischer IdentityLogo Design Contest

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Hello! I have very similar comments to the last previous logo you submitted. I like that this version is an upside-down triangle because it looks more like a shield than the previous logo. But again, I like the way the F and the I are incorporated into the concept. I would just love to see the shield concept, and perhaps (if possible) even the keyhole concept incorporated into it. I also like the lettering on this logo better than the previous logo. The only thing I would change is rather than a , (comma) I would use a | (line separator) in the slogan because I think it would mesh better with the line concept you have going on around the slogan.

I wouldn't change anything about the coloring for the text, because I think that's great, perhaps just make the slogan slightly bolder and and a little less dark. But if possible I would like to incorporate the dark blue, lighter blue, orange/red, and/or green into the logo.

But I so far I think this has a lot of potential and I appreciate your contribution! Thank you!

I really like that you incorporated the F and the I into the logo. However I would love to see it in a shield design if possible. I would also like to see the use of the dark/navy blue with a dark gray rather than a black. And if possible I would like to incorporate a few more of the colors from the color pallette file I uploaded to the logo brief. But this is great so far. Keep up the great work! Definitely a finalist!

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