Entry #1: gold woman is not visible, letters sink behind or overpowered by black box. What ist the black box standing for? At least, it does not please us. :-(
Entry #2: Logo is too simple. Letter mix: Festtags-Schneiderei - wrong slogan: "perfekter Sitz - perfekter Tag" The font should have more elegant swings around, maybe italic. The bottom of the dress spreads out too much, should be taller. the shining star at the dress looks good, maybe you can put 2-3 more (maybe on/at/around the font)
Regarding your dress in entry #2: we would like to have/see an elegant symbol/emblem with a feminin dress and a well dressed man. They can maybe reach each others hand. The symbol of the man/woman should show, that they feel great in their perfectly tailored clothes and that everybody is looking to them because they look so great. these are the emotions, that the emblem should transfer to the customer