Federal MaintenanceLogo Design Contest

Great job. I like the artwork. It has some depth and dimension to it and looks like a building. Can you make a version with the tag line larger so its more readable when the logo is usd in a small way. Also, lets change the tag line to read Commercial Cleaning Services instead of Commercial Janitorial Services.
And f you can make a version using Small Cap font that woudl be awesome.

Thanks,
Bob Sage
www.fedmaint.com

Hi Bob,

thanks for the feedback,
here is my revision...

thanks in advance,

whipsnade

(This comment references Entry #121)

Yes, I definitely lke the readability of the tag line in entry # 125
I am not very fond of lowercase letters. Small Caps are like entry #92
I don't like the light blue used in #121 or the crooked building used in #124
Great work!

I have friends in Sentul City, Jakarta. Where in Indonesia are you?

Hi Bob,

Thank for the feedback,

here is another revision with another font...

i live in Bandung not far from Jakarta.. :)

thanks in advance,

whipsnade

(This comment references Entry #130)

another logo...

(This comment references Entry #131)

Congrats! I just did an informal survey of the top 8 ranked logos with my office staff and your #130 took first place. We like the font and the artwork. I am not sure how clean the tag line will show up when the logo is embroidered on a shirt. We are thinking we'd just have it embroidered without the tag line. Can you show us a version with out the tag line to give us an idea of how that would look on our uniforms? I am sure we'll use the tag line on our letterhead, business cards, brochure, web site, etc.

Thank you.

Hi...
It would be my honored to be your First Ranking in your logo contest...
here's the revision without the tagline

Thanks in advance
Whipsnade

(This comment references Entry #138)