here are my entries #1 #2 just to make a start. If you have any your feedback is much appreciated. for adjustments or color combinations please feel free to contact me
I am a your disposal. kind regards Tzina (lotus creative)
Despite this being outside the scope of the brief, which was to redesign the current logo into a horizontal format, I do very much like this, I am going to show it to my partner whose business this is as he is the one doing the diving part of it (I just do the boring business stuff) and see what he thinks.
One note however is that "Fantasea" must appear as one word NOT split with 2 colors.
I do appreciate a version that works on a dark background also.
This is also a similar format to the original logo in terms of shape, the original purpose of this logo tournament though is to create a horizontal type format, please review the screen shot of the new website that is being designed as we need a logo that is 600px wide x 150px tall (approximately), the lower part of which will be over an image.
dear contest holder thank you for the feedback . I will work also on your current logo on the adjustments you requested. kind regards Tzina (lotus creative)
Also - the logo needs to contain the words "and Adventures" and the dive flag (a red rectangle with a white diagonal stripe) needs to be incorporated in somehow, like in the existing logo where it is in a circle that is part of the letter "i"
I would really like to see the one ranked #5 developed, we are not opposed to changing the logo entirely, and I am very impressed with this design. 3 points however
1. Needs to include the words "and adventures" 2. Needs to include the diving flag (red with diagonal white strip in a square or circle) 3. Mermaid's hair needs to be not so many individual hairs but more stylized
But myself and my partner do very much like the direction of this logo - it is clean, simple and elegant
#16 & 17 - I don't like how "fuzzy" the lettering is, I am hoping to move the logo in a direction that looks more clean, streamlined etc than less than it already is.
We like # 48, but would like to see a few changes: 1. Mermaid needs to be curvier as in earlier designs eg # 21 2. Mermaids hair needs to be more defined as in original mermaid icon 3. Bubble needs to be just above mermaid's hand, not attached to it 4. Would like to see how it looks with the letter "f" in Fantasea capitalized "F" as it is in the word Dive 5. Would like to see the "&" changed to the word "and" and a font more similar to the original logo 6. We also need a version of the logo that will work on a dark background, see the image I uploaded in the original brief to see the website header it is needed for 7. would also like to see a version with placement of the dive logo (red with white) just slightly more separated from the font
dear contest holder thank you for the feedback . Here are revised entries : #49 #50 #51 #52 with adjustments according to your requirements Please feel free to contact me if you need color combinations or adjustments. kind regards Tzina (lotus creative
did you read the original brief? we need a logo in a horizontal format, these recent logos are in the same proportions as the original logo, and we need one that will work on a dark background, these do not, they get lost on the background image of the website header, which will be a changing image so creating something that works on one particular image is useless. the mermaid seems to have gotten less curvy again also, and the "F" in Fantasea is not capitalized as asked for.
we like the design but it solves neither of the design dilemmas we are facing in terms of finding a solution for the new website header. It needs to be a elongated horizontal format, more like #49, and work on a dark but not solid background, see the original uploaded image of the website header. The logos you have presented will get lost on that header
dear contest holder 1.the letter f is uppercase 2. I have used the same mermaid from the entry you suggested . please check your web site mail in which I have mailed you the logo in order to see how the logo works on the background. I am sorry for any inconvenience, but the mermaid with the most curves that you requested works better in this placement but I will try to find a solution to meet your needs . In order for me to upload new designs, you need to place my entry 1st due to logo tournament rules. kind regards Tzina