Falls Creek Retreat CenterLogo Design Contest

We like this one better!

You´re welcome fcrc2020!

Yes u can see picture mark with the circle solid, please check and let me know what do you think.

Anything else feel confortable to ask.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

That is great - could you make one change to the circle logo and make the two outer lines a solid circle - we would like to see it that way as well.

Thank you!

Hello fcrc2020,

Hope your day is going well.

Very glad you will use this amazing logo. Really love it!

Yes the circular version it´s the same logo so its not problem.

Thank you very much!

Kindly Regards,
João

Hi there! We are selecting you as the winner! We wanted to ask though if we could, in addition, also get the circular version of this logo? We aren't sure how we are supposed to go about that.

You´re welcome fcrc2020!

I appreciate your feedback. Yes sure i can please check revisions and some variations also so you can see the flexibility of the brand for future marketing materials usage.

As always i will be around if you need me.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

can we see an updated black and white version of this logo. Thanks,

Hello fcrc2020,

Hope you´re having a good rest of Sunday.

Just a quick update in case you reply and i delay, because in Portugal is late and i will sleep in a few minutes, but i will be back again tomorrow. If you need anything just let me know.

I will leave you my timezone bellow in case you need to check:
https://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/portugal/porto

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

Hello again fcrc2020,

I appreciate you updates.

Please check this font bellow, i had to manipulated manually to match the feel/vibe of the logo, so this font its unique also because of that small detail.

If you need anything more feel free to ask.

Thank you.

Kindly regards,
João

We really really like this, so again I am asking for curiosity sake. Could we see another font with a slight serif? This would only be for "Falls Creek."

I don't know if the icon would have to change a little to match a slight serif font.

You´re welcome fcrc2020!

I appreciate your coments as always.

I´ve submited revisions so you can considerate, please check and let me know your thoughts.

Feel confortable to ask if you need anything more.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

we really like this one, could we see it in a circle like #109. Thanks

We like the script of "rest" "reflect" "connect" can you add more spacing between the words. Thanks,

You´re welcome fcrc2020,

I´m glad you are happy with the revisions.

I appreciate all your feedback on my logos.

Please check revisions done for your appreciation and let me know what do you think.

As always feel free to ask if you need anything else.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

We like the script of the "rest" reflect" "connect" but do not like the FL (in "reflect") connect - can there be space between those two letters? It draws our eyes away from the other words.

Thanks for all your work! As we talk about logos with the team a couple of the people would like to see a lodge in this version (not a log cabin style). If you could add that it would be great. Thanks again.

Hi again fcrc2020,

I appreciate the feedback.

Yes sure please check revision for your appreciation and let me know if it´s all okay - #259

I agree the blues and greens work great, and go along with the title falls (green) creek (blue).

As always feel confortable to ask if you need anything more please.

Thank you.

kindly Regards,
João

I think we are leaning towards the versions with both blues and greens in the logo

like this - could you put more space between the words "rest" "reflect" "connect" (so the letters of each word closer together) to create more white space around the dots between each word - would appreciate seeing this and if it makes it easier to read those 3 words.

You´re welcome my pleasure to help.

Submited also a revision on this one so you can compare.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

Hello again fcr2020,

Thanks for all the comments on my designs.


I´ve submited revisions so you can appreciate, please chceck and let me know your thoughts.

About using different fonts on the other subtitles/slogans i would only use the same font always and sans serif since its more balanced and goes along with the clean feel of the brand. I like the one with the the little banner and white "retreat center" #243 That one really pop ups to the eye.

As always feel free to ask if you need anything else.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

THANK YOU FOR ALL YOUR HARD WORK.

We really like the 2 we have selected from you as front runners, and appreciate your responsiveness in this process.

Hi jjbq- thanks for letting us know.

We like the waves.

We still don't like the trees. Maybe there is a different combination you can show us of the two? The trees in #236 are better.

We like that Resilient Waterfront had all its top artwork connected. Maybe something like that?

The thickness of the font is easier to read.

We don't like the large box around the logo or the trees and wavy lines. Like our other comment - it too childish for our organization.

We like the lines for land and water on #157

Also on the bar - not only do we want an additional bar before retreat center – we would like to see it as a bold line, but also a version where it gets smaller and tapers off.

We feel it will help with reading the logo faster.

Another option is to try a silhouette color block with the Retreat Center font being white - like a banner around "Retreat Center".

We like the water in and green lines in the other version of this concept. This looks a bit too "cartoon/childish" compared to what our organization does.

We still really like the Resilient Waterfront - since all the lines flow together seamlessly, but the up and down water and these trees don't look as nice.

We would like the following changed:

Our favorite color choice #131 - but the "Falls" spacing is best on #147. We want those two designs combined.

From there, we would like to see the following:

We would like to see another bar after "retreat center." We think it will help with legibility.

We would also like to see the tagline “Rest. Reflect. Connect." with more spacing between the words and the circle disc dividers. It also would be interesting to see it in another font or potentially in lowercase.

We would also like to see different fonts for the 3 levels of words - see how it looks if they are different from one another.

Font – the main font for "Falls Creek" we would like more choices.

We like that #159 is stylish and the font has has more flow with its icon, but not the icon. We are not sure if we want a thin font, because it won’t show off the gradient as well. We like the font weight of number #7 but we want a font that has more movement that works with the “creek” lines in the icon. So definitely a heavier semi-bold font. This doesn't have to be the same font as retreat center or tagline.

Hello again fcrc2020,

As always i appreciate your feedback.

Please check some variations so you can appreciate
#234 | #235

I had to rebuild the concept again, because that type of tree iconography wasn´t working on the wavy graphics of the logo #157.

As always feel free to ask if you need anything else please.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

Like the words below- but can we get the "scene" above to be more like the Evergreen tree in the other logo? And more of them? The retreat center is 157 acres of wooded forest with waterfalls, creeks, and trees. We like seeing landscape iconography and not have people or animals.

Can we see this logo with the same color gradient as our first ranked choice?

You´re welcome fcrc2020!

I appreciate your quick update.

Sure take the time you need, i will be around if needed.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

will check them out with my co-worker in a couple of hours ... thanks for your hard work!

We like the gradients.

Thanks for the compliment on Resilient Watertown logo!

Hello dear fcrc2020,

I appreciate all you feedback.

Please check some revisions, variations and a new logo based on the one you gave me reference from my portfolio:
1. original font - #147 | #148 | #149
2. new font options - #150 | #151 | #152 | #153 | #154 | #155 | #156
3. new logo - #157 | #158

If you need anything else just let me know please.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

Sorry, we meant to say FONT Choices!! We would like to see some different font choices.

After looking at this we prefer "Falls" to have the same spacing as #7, even though it doesn't line up with the K

We love the color choices. Can we see some different choices?

Hi again fcrc2020,

I appreciate your feedback as always.

Please check revisions based on your feedback and let me know what do you think.

I´ve also submited a few gradients with themes inside it, so you can see the flexibility of the logo.

If you need anything else just let me know, feel free please.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

We looked at your portfolio and really liked the logo you designed for Resilient Watertown. We like your concept, can you do something similar for us to include trees and the creek? Of course we don't want the same thing, but we like the style and concept.

Also, we would like to see the logo with color gradients of the blue and green. A Green gradient for "Falls" and a blue gradient for "Creek". Try some brighter color choices like #7, that goes to a darker color like this logo.

we really like this design, we would like to see a couple more changes. first, we would like "Falls" and "Creek" to line up with each other. the S doesn't match up with the K.

We would like to see this version in all white.

You´re welcome fcrc2020,

I appreciate your great feedback.

Yes sure i can please check revisions for your appreciation, and let me know what do you think.

I´ve also submited some variations on background and b&w version of the logo so you can check the versatility of the brand.

If you need anything else just let me know.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

can you please provide another sample like this that has our slogan - rest. reflect. connect. And also make the forest green with less black/dark in it. Thanks,

Hello fcrc2020,

Hope you´re having a great day.

Thank you for your great feedback

Submited a few variations for your appreciation, please check and let me know what do you think.

If you need changes feel free to ask please.

Your feedback is always welcome.

Thank you.

Kindly Regards,
João

I like the concept, could the green color be a darker like a more forest green and the font be a bit lighter