i think #5 has potential. i like everything, but feel the colors need work. not crazy about the reddish. would look to integrate more gold/yellows that would show up or warm shades of brown. also would like to lose both hearts. please ask them for something else. not sure we need the word "in" encased and perhaps the one in between the two leaves could be a shape that would better meld with the design above it which i like very much.
Here is some feedback from our client #10 has potential, but the revision is dull. is there a way to know what that "symbol" is to the left of the words. like it, but maybe i could help more if i new what the artist was going for. it needs a vibrant color. maybe a lively purple. "A Private Club" needs to be more vibrant and in a different color than Fall in Love. taking the heart out from between the leaves has left all that dead. it needs something and the colors have no life. the whole thing needs to be brighter and sexier - because that graphic, whatever it is seems sexy. it needs to come to life.