Falcon Research & DevelopmentLogo Design Contest

Hello, I am honored to be participating in your contest. Here is my design #38 #39, I hope you enjoy.
If you have comments, please let me know.

Greetings. Daniel.

Daniel,

Thanks for your idea. This is definately something I am interested in! Nice work!

Can we see a modified falcon? I really like how you made it part of the N. I think we need something slightly more aggressive...that bird looks a little 'smooth'. But its very good!

Thanks for all your time!

J

Daniel!

It's great to see you again! Do you recognize us? We are the Fitness Connection company!

Anyways, not suprised to see you in first place again...thanks for everything!

J

Hello again, to my surprise when I saw my design in the first place.
Good to be here.

Here is my design with the required change #69.
Any requirement, please let me know.

Greetings. Daniel.

Thanks Daniel...always appreciate your work!

can i see a different eye in #69?
Now in #69, it doesn't look like an 'N' ...like it did in #39
i think we need to combine some stuff from both designs...but i like the extra line on the N

can i also see the design in blue / silver...like you had for our 'The Fitness Connection' logo?

Thanks!

J

Daniel,

Check out this logo:

http://www.google.com/imgres?um=1&hl=en&sa=N&biw=1280&bih=878&tbm=isch&tbnid=sgai5VC50xqSQM:&imgrefurl=http://www.captivateintl.com/portfolio/&docid=jWdrOfRArhK9DM&imgurl=http://www.captivateintl.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/10/falcon-investigations.jpg&w=803&h=505&ei=w9t2UIbHBcmk2gXuk4HIBQ&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=195&vpy=168&dur=151&hovh=178&hovw=283&tx=120&ty=129&sig=111571603976993577792&page=1&tbnh=160&tbnw=236&start=0&ndsp=20&ved=1t:429,r:0,s:0,i:74


I think more of the head, less of the body may be better. What do you think?

Thanks!!

J

Hello,
I find it interesting how it fits Falcon head to the floor #71 #72 #73 #74.

Here is my design with the required change, hope you're all well.

Greetings. Daniel.

OMG THAT IS AWESOME!!!!!

Hello, thanks.

Remember, if you have any requirement, please let me know.

Pleasure.

Greetings. Daniel.

Daniel,

in #73...make the falcon and text a dark silver, the rest orange on black background.
can i also see #73 in all orange, like you had in #69?

Thanks!

J

new changes #75 #76.

Greetings. Daniel.

Daniel!

Lets stick with #75 design. Just changing the colors. Please keep the name Falcon and the bird the same color...i think it looks best.

Can i see the Falcon in RED (like your EXCEL logo...and cand you make it two-toned?)
And the Research & Development in SILVER.

Also, can you add some more accent line to #75? Just line in #69...you added that line ot the back of the falcon...i think it gives it more dimension!

Thanks!!!

J

Hey Daniel,

Sorry, don't think i explained things enough. I wanted some more detail added to the bird. But not to change the outline...just added detail.

Also, keep the falcon silver, make Research & Development Blue...

Thanks!!

J

Daniel,

Can you use a different color for the eye in #89? How about black, and one in blue. Just the little round part of the eye...not the brow.

Thanks!

J

Eye blue color #95.

Daniel.

Daniel,

Can i please see #89 with RED 'Research & Development' (like red in #83)?
Also can you show me a darker red? like maroon?
Also throw in one with a red eye...

THANKS SO MUCH!!!

J

Hello, here is my design with the required change #106 #107, I hope you are all well.

Your comments are welcome.

Greetings. Daniel.

Daniel,

#89 can you change the letters to gold? Look @ #96. Think you can get something close? See how it has different shades?

Please leave the falcon silver...please make the eye gold as well.

Thanks!
J

Here are the new applications of color #122 #123.
Personally I like these color samples.

Your comments are welcome.

Greetings. Daniel.

Nice! and thanks for the personal opinion!

Could i please see:
'Research & Development' in that gold? and the falcon and bird silver? with a gold eye?

can i see this on black and white background?

thanks!!
J

Here are the designs required #124 #125.


Greetings. Daniel.

Thanks again!

Daniel, I'm worried about #124. It's hard to see the silver on the white background. Can you make the silver darker for the white background?

Also, can you use the different color / light shades for #106 (red). Like how the gold has a bunch of shades?

Thanks!

J

new changes #131 #132

Daniel

ok...i hope you don't mind if i keep making some changes. You logo is going to win...just not sure on the colors and some other things.

1. Can you make the birds tail shorter? I don't like how it swings out to the right...can you make it have less flair?

2. Can i see a different color? Something close to #76. But different.

Thanks...keep up the good work!
J

new changes, new color #135 #136 #137 #138.

I hope you are all well.

Daniel

Daniel,

How does #137 look on white?

J

Daniel,

One more revision, please!

Keep the color schemes you used in #152 & #137.

Can you make the tail even shorter on the bird? Like have it end right at the bottom of the 'N'

Thanks Daniel!

J

Hello, sorry for my delay in replying.
Emergency I had to travel this weekend, in addition to
Yesterday was a holiday in my country, I hope you understand.

Here is my design with the required change #159 #160, hope you're all well.

Your comments are welcome.

Greetings. Daniel.

Of course we understand...you are the best! would have waited until you were back no matter how long it took. i hope you are well.

Reviewing your work...will let you know if we need anything else!

Thank you!

J

OK, thank you very much.

Wait your comments and requests.

Greetings. Daniel.

Daniel,

i think 'Research & Development' in #160 is a little hard to read. Can you make it black? or dark, dark, grey, like a carbon fiber?

thanks!

Keep up the good work!

J

Hello, again.
Here's the change #161, I hope you're all well.

Greetings. Daniel.

Thanks Daniel!

Didn't turn out the best. How about that silver you used in #131? can you make the 'Research & Development' that color (in #161)?

Thanks!

J

new alternative color required #162 #163.

Greetings. Daniel.

in #163, please make the falcon (and the word falcon) the same silver you used in #131...leave the rest black. Also, black eye for the bird.

Thanks...sorry for all the revisions...but i think we are getting close!

J

Hello, here is the required change #164, I hope you are all well.


Greetings. Daniel.

Daniel...YOUR WORK IS SO AWESOME!!!

let me see if we can make a decision from here!

THANKS!!!

one more time, please:

Can you change #159. I would like 'Research & Development' to be in (dark) silver.

Thanks Daniel!

J

Oh, and the eye to be silver as well...Thanks!

Hello, here is the new change #165.

Greetings. Daniel.

In #165, can you make the eye darker (almost black)?

Thanks!