I prepared some new versions using the negative spaces of the letters to include a subtle music note. Also I tried to play a bit with the concept of fun using a smiley face with different executions.
Actually that was my idea, but maybe it would be best for you to go a different direction. If you just try to incorporate music and kids into your design that would be great. I don't want to make it look bad for either of you.
Sorry to ask this but I can be punished If I copy any concept that comes from another designer in the contest, just want to be sure that this idea: "the dot over the "I" in faith into a single eighth note" didnt comes from other designer so I can develop this concept without future issues. Sorry for the inquiry. I really appreciate your response.
Sure, could you move my entry to 1st for a while to upload revisions please? In this phase just your first ranked designer can continue uploading entries. Thanks!
Can you make the dot over the "I" in faith into a single eighth note, the "t" to look a little more like a cross (like maybe a black line through it before the crook) and an emoji (smiley face) on the dot over the "I" in kids to represent a "kid" Thanks
Remove the dove. I like it but it seems a little adult for what this is. Maybe the color scheme could be a little bolder. some of it disappears when you look at it from afar.
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