I really like the concept. Could we look at some different colors on fonts little less red maybe more brown? #14 is my favorite and #13 is a little too contemparary for this one. Could the clould/splash be scaled back a bit as well.
I really really like #27, wish mist/cloud was a little more dynamic and less cartoony. Can you also explore other color combinations altogether for text?
#55 is my favorite. Thinking about singage, what if the gold color was a darker brown (copper or bronze material for sign) and the Grey could be a lighter material such as stainless steel or aluminum?