Failing to SucceedLogo Design Contest

Hi jscerbo

Thanks for your feedback
Hope you can check my revisions for your considerations.
#65, #66, #67, #68
Really appreciate if you could give more direction for my logo design.

Regards

WSS

try a burnt red please, try one that has the points up/down be more like a subtle arrows

try a burnt red please

failing to succeed is the name, try a burnt red too