RAM (Comes from Rock Air Maintenance)Logo Design Contest

Can you make the letters more bold for RAM and the Slogan in both 82 & 83? Thanks!

Hi Donald, thanks again for your helpful feedback. I added two new designs to the contest with a cleaner, more legible, and simpler typeface. I really appreciate the direction! How are these looking?

Also, put the design artwork next to Ram like you had in 8, then put the slogan under the entirety. Thanks!

Try different font for "RAM" I don't like the little "spurs" on the letters. Also, choose a different font for the slogan so it is easier to read and make it black or very dark grey. I think the size is correct though - good work! Thanks!

Thank you for your detailed feedback, Donald! I'm thrilled your group has interest in my design. I have uploaded a new variation with the revisions you mentioned. Please let me know if anything else comes to mind.

Just had a group meeting on the subject. The group likes this design, but would like to seem "RAM" a bit larger or taller - perspective? Also, please make the slogan/motto in all caps and a bit more distinct. Great work!

Just make the motto/slogan a bit easier to see, but not take over the logo.